Post by Shinku Kodoku on Sept 5, 2017 2:57:59 GMT -5
The first thing I want to address was the oddity I found in your word totals. This is what I found, and mostly, you were undercutting yourself from what I see. Make sure you are using the board’s word counter, and not something like MSWord’s.
The second is the format of the GP request. A) Formatting the threads like this [url=THREADADDRESS]THREADTITLE[/url] will give it a much more appealing appearance for us who go through the requests! Also, including if the thread is *Completed or *Abandoned is likewise important, so ensure you include that information regardless of formatting.
B) Please ensure that you include the math you came up for GP totals. We should be verifying, not doing it for you, but I went ahead and included it this time. It totaled out to be 507 GP in this request.
C) You did not state what your intent for the GP is going to be. I could assume Banked, but showing what you want is important too. It is also helpful to include the information like what your current bank/used totals are before and after the GP gain so we can verify the numbers.
Before I approve this, please reply to this post with the changes I have asked for to ensure you understand this information.
Thank you for your cooperation! I hope I have provided you some tools that will help you with future requests and endeavors!
Post by Shinku Kodoku on Sept 6, 2017 4:08:30 GMT -5
Normally, we do not tell you how to spend your points, but at your stage in the game, the likeliness of you NOT having Blut in any form is extremely minimal, and I have a hard time believing that you have not used it once in your time RPing here. You have more than enough GP in your bank to buy Mastery without the need to move any out of Blut, so that is my recommendation.
Also, you don't have to, but your last two links aren't nice and pretty like all the others, but the truth is this is a huge improvement in GP request! Good work! Just address the above issue, double check your numbers, and let me know when you got it!
Hmm, I would still like for you to write an ending to it, it doesn't have to contain a 'real conclusion'. You can always go with them 'talking about it another time' etc. As it is now, it still looks like you've made it go inactive, and while you might have your reasons for that, I'm not fond of making exceptions because doing that leads to inconsistency.
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